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The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. MMy9q
The graph provide information about the increase of modern population in a particular sector in the the world in addition to the forecast of the future Generally speaking, it can see from the chart that the numbrer of population in 1990 is been flacuated, whereas the population is expected to be grown in 20000. latin america is the most populated country comparing with others in all diffrent period while Asia and Africa have almost similar growth population. In terms of the past period, latin america had a significant large number of population in 1990 with a precentage of just above 40 %. As opposed to both africa and asia, which were considered as the lowest population in the year 1990 with a population precentage of (10% and just above 10 %) respectively. the whole world´s dense had a triple prospretion that africa and asia had with a rate of exactly 30. in the period of 2000, all sector in the world had been increased. in latin america, the raise of the amount of people in the country was significant it jumped from 40% to 70%. asia and africa climbed dramatically to a precentage of just under 40. However, the whole world had not experience a magnificent growth as the others in a rate of almost 40%. In regard to the future expectation, there is a slight growth in all over the earth. First comes the highest expectation change, which is in latin america with a rise of 80%. subcequentally comes whole world in at a number of exactly 60%. at last come africa and asia with a prospretion of 50% and 55% respectively.
The graph provide information about the increase of modern
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population
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, whereas the
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in 20000.
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latin
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america
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diffrent
period while Asia and Africa have almost similar growth population.

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latin
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america
had a significant large number of
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population
in 1990 with a
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precentage
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above 40 %. As opposed to both
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africa
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asia
, which
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population
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in
the period of 2000, all sector in the
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had
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, the raise of the amount of
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asia
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a magnificent growth as the others in a rate of almost 40%.

In regard to the future expectation, there is a slight growth in all over the earth.
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america
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subcequentally
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respectively
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future.

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