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The chart below gives information about the cases and deaths from Poliomyelitis in France from 1945 to 1073.

The chart below gives information about the cases and deaths from Poliomyelitis in France from 1945 to 1073. lR0qK

The given line graph illustrates the figures of cases and deaths from Poliomyelitis between 1945 and 1973. It is clear that from 1945 to 1973, the number of cases and deaths beacause of Poliomyelitis in France was fluctuated, and cases were higher than deaths but they became approximately until 1973. The cases from Poliomyelitis was gradual, but it decreased slowly throughout the period with 0. 3 in 1945 and aproximately 0 in 1973. It reached a peak at 1 in 1956 and decreased slightly till 1973. The number of deaths fluctuated more significantly than the number of cases. The highest point was in 1957 by 9. From 1960 to 1965, the

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 it decreased slowly
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the cases and deaths from Poliomyelitis in France from 1945 to 1073.

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