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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2021, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2021, and future projections for 2025. 5n7A
The given chart represents the Southland’s income in 3 different years including year 2000, year 2021 and prevision for year 2025, which come from dairy merchandises, raw meat selling, and foreigners. As an overall trend, the total money comes from tourism, followed by dairy product and fresh product respectively. It can be noticeable that for foreigner expense in 2000 is just over 8 billion pounds taking the vast majority of the overall income. This rises to almost 9 million pounds in this year and tends to reach approximately 10 billions in the next 4 years. Moving on to the dairy merchandise, the sells make just under7 billion pounds in 21 years ago. Interestingly, it significantly increase in the present year, which make around 10 billion pounds. However, the income is expected to drop by 2 billion pounds in the future. For the supply of meat products, it reached its peak at 6 billion pounds. Afterward, the trend gradually decreases and reachs 5. 5 billions in the current years. Consequently, it is projected to reduce reaching 5 billions in 2025.
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chart represents the Southland’s income in 3
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from dairy merchandises, raw meat selling, and foreigners. As an
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2021, and future projections for 2025.

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