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The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. 173y
The chart indicates the data of global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or Video. Overall, as we take a look at the chart, we see there are significant differences over the years. First item is global sales. Global sales are less than others by years. However, it has increased. The amount of thr sales were approximately 15 billion dollars based on the chart. Next years it was up to 12, 17 and 19 respectively. DVD or Video has also noticeable changes among the years. The amount of the global sales were around 18, 22, 26 and 33 in 2000, 2001, 2002 and 2003 respectively. The last item is CDs. CDs were always on the peak of the chart between 2000 and 2003. Although other items have increased over the years, CDs has diminished. It was about 35, 34, 33 and 31 over the years.
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indicates the data of
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global
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sales
of games software,
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CDs
and DVD or Video.

Overall
, as we take a look at the
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, we
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there are significant differences over the years.

First
item is
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global
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.
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Global
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are less than others by years.
However
, it has increased. The amount of
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sales
were approximately 15 billion dollars based on the
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.
Next
years it was up to 12, 17 and 19
respectively
. DVD or Video has
also
noticeable
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changes
among the years. The amount of the
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global
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sales
were around 18, 22, 26 and 33 in 2000, 2001, 2002 and 2003
respectively
. The last item is
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CDs
.
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CDs
were always on the peak of the
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chart
between 2000 and 2003. Although other items have increased over the years,
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CDs
has diminished. It was about 35, 34, 33 and 31 over the years.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

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