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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This chart illustrates the information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. The units provided here are in percentage. The countries mentioned here for comparisons are North America, China, India and Europe along with Other Asia Pacefic, Latin America and Caribean and Rich Asia-Pacefic. North America is the highes amongest all others in terms of Global Wealth by 34% while the lowest in Global Wealth is India and Africa by 1-2% approximately. The second highest in Global Wealth is Europe by 30% and Rich Asia-Pacefic is at 24%. While the other three countires continue to be at the range of 5%. China is the highest in terms of population by being at 24% while the lowest is Rich Asia-Pacefic which is 5% Whilst North America is the second lowest. Three other countries that are almost similar to each other by being at the range of 15% to 14% are Other Asia-Pacefic, India and Europe. Africa is at 10% and Latin America and Caribean is at 7%. In conclusion i observe that there is a verstile difference in terms of population and Global Wealth amongst all of these countries.
This chart illustrates the information about
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population percentages and distribution of
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wealth
by region. The units provided here are in percentage. The countries mentioned here for comparisons are North America, China, India and Europe along with
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Other
Asia
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Pacefic
, Latin America and
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and Rich
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Asia-Pacefic
.

North America is the
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amongest
all others in terms of
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by 34% while the lowest in
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is India and Africa by 1-2% approximately. The second highest in
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is Europe by 30% and Rich
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is at 24%.
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continue to be at the range of 5%.

China is the highest in terms of population by being at 24% while the lowest is Rich
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Asia-Pacefic
which is 5% Whilst North America is the second lowest. Three
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countries that are almost similar to each
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by being at the range of 15% to 14% are
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Asia-Pacefic
, India and Europe. Africa is at 10% and Latin America and
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is at 7%.

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observe that there is a
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difference in terms of population and
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amongst all of these countries.
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