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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives data about the percentages of Internet users, categorized by age groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives data about the percentages of Internet users, categorized by age groups. 9Lrjx
The bar chart shows the difference between the percentages of four different age groups which used the internet from 1998 to 2000. Overall, it is clear that the Internet usage between users aged less than 15 years and more than 50 is considerably lower than those aged between 16 and 30 years. The figures for 16 to 30-year-old users and 31 to 50 ranked first and second, respectively, over the given period. In 1998, The highest figures for 16-30 and 30-50 groups were reported. The former hit a peak of about %52 and the latter was just above %40. Over the next two years, the figures for 16-30 and 31-50 age groups declined steadily by %10, and %3, respectively. The less than 15-year-old users had a negligible proportion of the internet usage, and the 50 or more group had %3 Internet access among the four groups given in 1998. The figures for less than 15 and 50 or more witnessed insignificant increases of about %7 in 2000.
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the difference between the percentages of four
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age
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groups
which
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the internet from 1998 to 2000.

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, it is
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clear
that the Internet usage between users aged less than 15 years and more than 50 is
considerably
lower than those aged between 16 and 30 years. The
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for 16 to 30-year-
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users and 31 to 50 ranked
first
and second,
respectively
, over the
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period.

In 1998, The highest
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figures
for 16-30 and 30-50
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groups
were reported
. The former hit a peak of about %52 and the latter was
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just
above %40. Over the
next
two years, the
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figures
for 16-30 and 31-50 age
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groups
declined
steadily
by %10, and %3,
respectively
.

The less than 15-year-
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users had a negligible proportion of the internet usage, and the 50 or more
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group
had %3 Internet access among the four
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groups
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given
in 1998. The
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for less than 15 and 50 or more witnessed insignificant increases of about %7 in 2000.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives data about the percentages of Internet users, categorized by age groups.

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