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The graph depicts the intake of fish and different types of meat in European counties between the year 1979 and 2004.

The graph depicts the intake of fish and different types of meat in European counties between the year 1979 and 2004. 15nxW
The graph depicts the intake of fish and different types of meat in European counties between the year 1979 and 2004. The Consumption of Chicken, rapidly increased, while beef and lamb intake sharply decreased. fish consumption was at 60 grams Per person per week in the year 1979, with very little deflections it had been 50 grams 2004. Beef started with 220 grams in the year 1979, had seen its peak 240 grams in the year 1984 with a difference of  20 grams. And Sipped to 100 grams during the year 2004. Chicken and Lamb Started more over at 150gms in the year l979. But both Showed the different trend, Contrast  to each other. chicken was at peak with 260 gram during 2004, highest compared to all other meats. while, lamb had gradually fallen to 60 grams in the yeas 2004. Which is the largest dip with 90 grams.
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1979 and 2004. The Consumption of Chicken,
rapidly
increased, while beef and lamb intake
sharply
decreased.

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fish
consumption was at 60
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grams
Per person per week in the
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year
1979, with
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very
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deflections it had been 50
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2004. Beef
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started
with 220
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in the
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1979, had
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its peak 240
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grams
in the
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1984 with a difference of
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20
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. And Sipped to 100
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during the
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2004.

Chicken and Lamb
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Started
more over at 150gms in the
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l979.
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both
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trend, Contrast
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to each other.
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chicken
was at peak with 260
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during 2004, highest compared to all other meats.
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while
, lamb had
gradually
fallen to 60
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in the yeas 2004.
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IELTS academic The graph depicts the intake of fish and different types of meat in European counties between the year 1979 and 2004.

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