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The table below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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The provided table illustrates that data on coffee and bananas sold by five the most European countries between 1999 and 2004. It can be seen that UK ranked first and hence, increase over five years from 1. 5 to 2 million euros. The figure of Swiss was second the most significantly and it doubled in 2004 while Denmark as well as Belgium slowly rose approximately 0. 5 million, respectively. Sweden former remained stable later with 0. 2 million in five years. The second table show that United Kingdom had the highest banana sold in both years, suddenly it rocked from 15 million to 47 million euros during five years. It is clearly that it was little difference between the figure of Denmark and Belgium ( almost 0. 3 million euros ) respectively and hence, Sweden reached the last level both tables nearly about 1 million within five years.
The provided table illustrates that data on coffee and bananas sold by five the most European countries between 1999 and 2004. It can be
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IELTS academic The table below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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