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The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. RN5rp
The bar chart shows the amounts of car journeys made by residents and non-residents into the city between 1996 and 2005. Overall, not only residents but also non-residents car using regarding journey into the city centre decreased during the period. First of all, the value of the residents’ car using stayed around 9500 in the first 4 years when non-residents’ increased consistently in same years. Afterwards, parking meters were started to use in 2000 and it decreased residents’ using from around 9500 to 5000. On the other hand, this parking meters didn’t affect the number of non-resident, which means it remained stable with approximately 8000 people between 2000 and 2002. In addition, in same years, the car use ıf the residents were 5000 people by slightly decreasing to around 4500 in 2001. Furthermore, Westgate Street and Park Lane closed to traffic in 2003 and although it decreased dramatically non-residents’ car journeys which went down from just above 8000 to nearly 3000 in 2003, in following years it went up to around 5000 in 2005. Besides the value of the residents’ stayed at just under 4000 between 2003-2005, slightly falling to 3500 in 2004.
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residents
and non-residents into the city between 1996 and 2005.

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also
non-residents
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car
using regarding journey into the city
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centre
decreased during the period.

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, the value of the
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residents’
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car
using stayed
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around
9500 in the
first
4 years when non-residents’ increased
consistently
in same years. Afterwards, parking meters were
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started
to
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use
in 2000 and it decreased
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residents’
using from
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around
9500 to 5000.
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, this parking meters didn’t affect the number of
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non-resident
, which means it remained stable with approximately 8000
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people
between 2000 and 2002.
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, in same years, the
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car
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use
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residents
were 5000
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people
by
slightly
decreasing to
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around
4500 in 2001.

Furthermore
,
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Street and Park Lane closed to traffic in 2003 and although it decreased
dramatically
non-residents’
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car
journeys which went down from
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just
above 8000 to
nearly
3000 in 2003, in following years it went up to
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around
5000 in 2005.
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the value of the
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residents’
stayed at
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under 4000 between 2003-2005,
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falling to 3500 in 2004.
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IELTS academic The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

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