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The chart below give information about the growth of urban population

The given column denotes the percentage about development of urban population in certain part of the word such as whole word, Africa, Asia and Latin America including the prediction of future in 1950, 2000 and 2030. A more vivid analysis of the whole data reveals that population will accounted for four fifth by latin America in the year 2030 while in 1950 and 2020, population of this region stood at out of seven and two fiftg respectively. According to the chart just under a two fifth population of the whole was constituted in the year 1950 however in the year 2020, urban population increased and after 30 years year it population will be double on the other hand Africa population comprised just over the one in all, in 1950 but it will be four fold in the year 2030. It can be noticeable, in the year 1950, population of Asia accounted for approximately 13%. after a half-century it increased and reach near the two fifth. in future, it will be more than double, in this year 2030 To conclude, it is immediately clear that in future it is not is that all nation population will increase carbonation will has high population
The
given
column denotes the percentage about development of urban
population
in certain part of the word such as whole word, Africa, Asia and Latin America including the prediction of future in 1950, 2000 and 2030. A more vivid analysis of the whole data reveals that
population
will
accounted
for four fifth by
latin America
in the
year
2030 while in 1950 and 2020,
population
of this region stood at out of seven and two
fiftg
respectively
. According to the chart
just
under a two fifth
population
of the whole
was constituted
in the
year
1950
however
in the
year
2020, urban
population
increased and after 30 years
year
it
population
will be double
on the other hand
Africa
population
comprised
just
over the one in all, in 1950
but
it will be
four fold
in the
year
2030. It can be noticeable, in the
year
1950,
population
of Asia accounted for approximately 13%.
after
a half-century it increased and reach near the two fifth.
in
future, it will be more than double, in this
year
2030
To conclude
, it is immediately
clear
that in future it is not is that all nation
population
will increase carbonation will has high
population
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