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he graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The line graphs depict the number of inhabitants and non residents students who enrolled in Australian universities since, 10 years. Overall, from the beginning of the year 2001 until the year 2010 the proportion of students who took admission in Australian university was inclined. From 2001-2005, major amount of courses were enrolled by the overseas students from the beginning of the year until the year 2005 it reached from (20, 000-40, 000) students approximately. While the proportion of local students were less as compared to the non -citizens of the Australia, which was below ( 20, 000). On further analysis, from 2006 to 2010, there was static increase in number of overseas students till 2009, after 2009 there was slightly rose in the enrollment of foreigner students as they reached at 80, 000. Although, there was steady increase in the number of local students that were from (20, 000-40, 000).

The line graphs depict the number of inhabitants and This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.non-residentsnonresidents
non residents
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students
 who enrolled in Australian universities since, 10 years.

Overall
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students
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year
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 2005 it reached from (20, 000-40, 000) You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
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20, 000).

On further
 analysis, from 2006 to 2010, there was static increase in number of overseas You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 till 2009, after 2009 there was slightly
 rose in the enrollment of foreigner You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 as they reached at 80, 000. Although, there was steady increase in the number of local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 that were from (20, 000-40, 000). 