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The chart below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050

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The provided pie charts illustrate the, survey regarding the population of Yemen and Italy based on their age groups in 2000 and also the estimation for 2050. Overall, it's clear that, immense amount of middle aged people were occupied in these given nations furthermore it's shows that the same prediction in the year 2050. A key takeaway from the figures is that, in 2000 total half of the population were in the age group of 0-14 years and slightly reduction shows in the estimated proportion (37. 0%) in 2050. Although, 46. 3% of total population were in the age group of 15-59 years. Interestingly noticed that the percentage would be increased (57. 3%) in 2050. But only 3. 6%of senior citizens were occupied in 2000 furthermore, significant raise (5. 7%) forecasted for 2050 Moving ahead, in Italy, majority 61. 6% of the people were in the age group of 15-59 years in 2000 but predicted only 46. 2% will be in 2050. However, higher proportion (42. 3%) of people who comes under the age group of above 6 0 might be cover the area in 2050. But in 2000, only one fifth of the total population was senior citizen. In fact, least percentage 14. 3% were as children and the prediction shows 11. 5% in 2050.

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