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The chart andgraph below give information about participants who have enteredthe Olympics since it began.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart andgraph below give information about participants who have enteredthe Olympics since it began. EYRM
The bar chart shows the number of men and women participated in the Olympic games while the line graph gives the number of all participants in the Olympics. The data is given for four years which are 1924, 1952, 1984 and 2012. Overall, The number of all participants grew steadily through these years and the proportion of women who compete in the Olympic games increased among these 88 years. The number of men participated in the Olympic games rose gradually and almost doubled from 3000 in 1924 to about 6000 in 2012. Although the number of women who were present in the Olympics was lower than men in all four years, females’ contribution to the games had a dramatic change. Just approximately 100 participants from about 3100 participants in the Olympic games 1924 were women, while in 2012 there were more than 4500 women between a few more than 10000 players in the Olympic games (about 40% of whole participants).
The bar chart
shows
the
number
of
men
and
women
participated in the Olympic
games
while the line graph gives the
number
of all
participants
in the Olympics. The data is
given
for four years which are 1924, 1952, 1984 and 2012.

Overall
, The
number
of all
participants
grew
steadily
through these years and the proportion of
women
who compete in the Olympic
games
increased among these 88 years.

The
number
of
men
participated in the Olympic
games
rose
gradually
and almost doubled from 3000 in 1924 to about 6000 in 2012. Although the
number
of
women
who were present in the Olympics was lower than
men
in all four years, females’ contribution to the
games
had a dramatic
change
.
Just
approximately 100
participants
from about 3100
participants
in the Olympic
games
1924 were
women
, while in 2012 there were more than 4500
women
between a few more than 10000 players in the Olympic
games
(about 40% of whole
participants)
.
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IELTS academic The chart andgraph below give information about participants who have enteredthe Olympics since it began.

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