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he frequency of eating at fast-food restaurants among the USA residents from 2003 to 2013

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The bar chart illustrates the frequency of eating at fast-food restaurants among USA residents from 2003 to 2013. Overall, it is evident that the highest percentage of the regularity of people visited such restaurants is once a week or even only once or twice a month, throughout the whole time frame. In the first period given, most people in the USA (around 30%) regularly visited fast-food outlets once a week and once to twice a month. In contrast, 5% of people never spent time eating at such a place. In addition, 20% of the citizens ate in those place several times a week and only around 4% who went there every day. In 2006, there were more residents in the USA consuming fast food at restaurants once per week than those who came every day, several times a week, and a few times a year. Then, in 2013, fewer people had visited fast food outlets once or twice per month (35%). Those who came every day decreased slightly to approximately 3%, while people who came a few times a year increased to 15% in 2006 and remained unchanged in 2013.
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-food restaurants among USA residents from 2003 to 2013.
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visited such restaurants is
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or even
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in the USA (around 30%)
regularly
visited
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fast
-food outlets
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a
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week
and
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once
to twice a month.
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, 5% of
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never spent
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eating at such a place.
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addition, 20% of the citizens ate in those place several
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around 4%
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went there every day.

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2006, there were more residents in the USA consuming
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food at restaurants
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than those
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came every day, several
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, and a few
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a year. Then, in 2013, fewer
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had visited
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food outlets
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once
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who
came every day decreased
slightly
to approximately 3%, while
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came a few
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a year increased to 15% in 2006 and remained unchanged in 2013.
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IELTS academic he frequency of eating at fast-food restaurants among the USA residents from 2003 to 2013

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