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The bari chart below shows the number of research students studying different subject in 2005.

The bari chart below shows the number of research students studying different subject in 2005. Oq5N
The given bar graph depicts the comparison of male and female research students who was studying six various subject in the year of 2005. Overall, it can be observed that, both category students interested the most in studying natural science, whereas, the nadir number of female students were studying mathematics. According to bar graph, an equal number of male and female students studied in natural science, which was about 200 students. Additionally, the number of male students were remaining same who was studying psychology and mathematics. Whereas, around 180 female students were studying psychology subject and approximately 40 female students were studying mathematics. Furthermore, the highest number of male students studied in engineering and programming and both subject had an equal students which was about 150. Although, the number of female students who was studying engineering subject was slightly higher who was studying programming subject, which was about 90 female students in engineering and almost 75 in programming. Moreover, a significant number of female students studied in linguistics subject, which was about 120 students, whereas, the number of male students who was studying linguistics was around 70 students.
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