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The line chart gives information about the total number of people visiting a Caribbean island over a 7-year period, as well as the number of two different types of visitors.

The line chart gives information about the total number of people visiting a Caribbean island over a 7-year period, as well as the number of two different types of visitors. GMNJe
The line chart gives information about the total number of people visiting a Caribbean island over a 7-year period, as well as the number of two different types of visitors. Overall, the total number and both types of visitors experienced an upward trend over time, while the figure for visitors who stayed on cruise ships surpassed those staying on the island in 2016, becoming the biggest group of visitors. As the graph shows, the total number of visitors started at 1 million in 2010 and continued to grow between 2010 and 2017. The figure reached a peak of 3. 5 million in 2017. Similarly, starting at approximately 0. 25 million in 2010, the figure for visitors who stayed on cruise ships rose to 0. 5 million in 2011, followed by a slight decrease to 0. 25 million in 2012. Afterward, it witnessed a steady increase to 2 million in 2017. By contrast, the number of visitors staying on the island stood at 0. 75 million in 2010 and remained constant in 2011. Then, it rose rapidly to 1. 5 million in 2013 but leveled off between 2014 and 2015. More visitors preferred staying on the island than on cruise ships before the decrease to 1. 25 million in 2016. The figure subsequently rose to 1. 5 million in 2017.
The line chart gives information about the total
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number
of
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people
visiting a Caribbean
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island
over a 7-year period,
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as the
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number
of two
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different
types of visitors.

Overall
, the total
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number
and both types of
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visitors
experienced an upward trend over time, while the
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figure
for
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visitors
who stayed on cruise ships surpassed those staying on the
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island
in 2016, becoming the biggest group of visitors.

As the graph
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shows
, the total
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number
of
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visitors
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started
at 1
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million
in 2010 and continued to grow between 2010 and 2017. The
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figure
reached a peak of 3. 5
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million
in 2017.
Similarly
, starting at approximately 0. 25
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million
in 2010, the
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figure
for
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visitors
who stayed on cruise ships rose to 0. 5
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million
in 2011, followed by a slight decrease to 0. 25
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million
in 2012. Afterward, it witnessed a steady increase to 2
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million
in 2017.

By contrast, the
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of
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visitors
staying on the
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island
stood at 0. 75
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million
in 2010 and remained constant in 2011. Then, it rose
rapidly
to 1. 5
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million
in 2013
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but
leveled off between 2014 and 2015. More
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visitors
preferred staying on the
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island
than on cruise ships
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before
the decrease to 1. 25
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million
in 2016. The
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figure
subsequently
rose to 1. 5
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million
in 2017.
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IELTS academic The line chart gives information about the total number of people visiting a Caribbean island over a 7-year period, as well as the number of two different types of visitors.

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219 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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