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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA Average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 2NqX
The given pie charts explain the consumption of various nutrients in both meal and snacks about the average person in the USA. If they increase these nutrients if their daily intake, it will be unhealthy of their health. Overall, As it observed from chart that they add more sodium and saturated fat while having a dinner; Likewise, they add more sugar on snacks. Initially, the average person in USA added more sodium and saturated fat while having dinner 43 per cent and 37 per cent respectively; Whereas, 42 per cent of sugar added on snacks. They add sodium, saturated fat and sugar their breakfast 14%, 16% and 16% respectively. Secondly, sodium and saturated fat accounted for 14 % and 21% respectively in snacks and sugar contributed 23% of their dinner. Finally, consumption of sodium and saturated fat made 29% and 26% respectively on their lunch; Likewise, added sugar accounted for 19%.
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the consumption of various nutrients in both meal and
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about the average person in the USA. If they increase these nutrients if their daily intake, it will be unhealthy of their health.
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more sodium and
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in USA
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more sodium and
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while having dinner 43 per cent and 37 per cent
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their breakfast 14%, 16% and 16%
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, sodium and
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accounted for 14 % and 21%
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contributed 23% of their dinner.
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, consumption of sodium and
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made 29% and 26%
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respectively
on their lunch;
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accounted for 19%.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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