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The chart above shows the value of exports of a country in 2015 and 2016 for different product categories. Summarise the information.

The chart above shows the value of exports of a country in 2015 and 2016 for different product categories. 2bn8b
The double bar graph illustrates the export earnings from 5 different product categories which include petroleum products, engineered goods, jewelry, agricultural products and textiles. The X-Axis represents the earnings in billions of dollars and the Y-axis represents the product categories. A comparison has been showcased between exports in 2015 and exports in 2016. It can be observed that the total exports increased from 2015 to 2016 for every product category apart from gems and jewelry. The textile products have the highest percentage increase in exports with 15. 24%. It's followed by engineered goods, which have experienced a percentage increase of 8. 5%. Petroleum products and agricultural products have undergone a minimal increase of 3% and 0. 81% respectively. On the other hand, gems and jewelry have shown a negative growth of 5. 18%. Petroleum products and the engineered goods have the largest share in the total exports worth approximately a humongous 60 billion dollars. These are followed by jewelry exports, contributing approximately 40 billion dollars. The smallest share is held by agricultural products and textiles, both worth 30 billion dollars.
The double bar graph illustrates the
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earnings from 5
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categories which include petroleum
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, engineered
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goods
,
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jewelry
, agricultural
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products
and textiles. The X-Axis represents the earnings in
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billions
of
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and the Y-axis represents the
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categories. A comparison has
been showcased
between
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exports
in 2015 and
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in 2016.

It can
be observed
that the total
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exports
increased from 2015 to 2016 for every
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category apart from gems and
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jewelry
. The textile
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have the highest percentage increase in
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exports
with 15. 24%. It's followed by engineered
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goods
, which have experienced a percentage increase of 8. 5%. Petroleum
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products
and agricultural
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have undergone a minimal increase of 3% and 0. 81%
respectively
.
On the other hand
, gems and
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jewelry
have shown a
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growth of 5. 18%.

Petroleum
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and the engineered
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goods
have the largest share in the total
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worth approximately a humongous 60
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billion
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. These
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by
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jewelry
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exports
, contributing approximately 40
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billion
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dollars
. The smallest share
is held
by agricultural
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and textiles, both worth 30
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IELTS academic The chart above shows the value of exports of a country in 2015 and 2016 for different product categories.

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