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The chart above compares twelve different countries in terms of the total number of winning Olympic medals.

The chart above compares twelve different countries in terms of the total number of winning Olympic medals. obMQ9
The chart above compares twelve different countries in terms of the total number of winning Olympic medals. It is clear that the USA is the most successful in winning medals at Olympics. Additionally, the figures for all kinds of trophies are fairly similar. As can be seen in the chart, the USA has the largest number of medals, at around 2300 pieces, including nearly 1000 gold medals, 700 silver, and 500 bronze. Ranking second is Soviet Union with the number of trophies being half of what they are in the USA. Only four nations - The UK, France, Germany and Baly won over 500 trophies and virtually saw the same proportion for each kind of color. Standing in contrast with The US, China has the smallest figures of medals, at 200 for gold and 100 for silver and bronze.
The chart above compares twelve
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countries in terms of the total number of winning Olympic medals.

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that the USA is the most successful in winning
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at Olympics.
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, the figures for all kinds of trophies are
fairly
similar.

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in the chart, the USA has the largest number of
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, at around 2300 pieces, including
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1000 gold
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, 700 silver, and 500 bronze. Ranking second is Soviet Union with the number of trophies being half of what they are in the USA.

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four nations
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The UK, France, Germany and
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won over 500 trophies and
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the same proportion for each kind of color. Standing
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with The US, China has the smallest figures of
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medals
, at 200 for gold and 100 for silver and bronze.
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IELTS academic The chart above compares twelve different countries in terms of the total number of winning Olympic medals.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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