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The bar diagram represents the information about how two countries such as France and UK incurs expense on consumer goods for the year 2010.

The bar diagram represents the information about how two countries such as France and UK incurs expense on consumer goods for the year 2010. DYdGm

The bar diagram represents the information about how two countries such as France and UK incurs expense on consumer goods for the year 2010. The graph is calibrated in terms of pounds sterling. From the overall perspective, it can be clearly seen that UK had accounted for the highest purchase of Cars when in comparison to France, while France experienced lowest funding on cameras in 2010. To begin with, the spending of France on cars were 400000 Sterling in 2010 whereas, the expenditure on perfume was half of it. However, UK incurred around less than 150000 pound for perfumes, while it doubled for computers in the given year. Further, it is depicted that the expense on cameras by France was 150000 which multiplied by two by the Britishers in the year 2010. Upon more observation it can be illustrated that the books were highly demanded by UK in 2010 where the amount spent on that measured at above 400000 and French bought books worth of 300000 Pounds. In addition to that, perfumes were the least favourite amongst the Britishers which experienced the value of 145000 pound.

The bar diagram represents the information about how two countries such as France and UK incurs expense on consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 for the year 2010. The graph is calibrated
 in terms of pounds sterling.

From the overall
 perspective, it can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that UK had accounted for the highest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 of Cars when in comparison
 to France, while France experienced lowest funding on cameras in 2010.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the spending of France on cars were 400000 Sterling in 2010 whereas, the expenditure on perfume was half of it. However
, UK incurred around less than Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.150000 pound (ca. 68 t)150000 pound (68.04 t)150000 pound (ca. 68 ton)150000 pound (68.04 ton)150000 pound (ca. 68,039 kg)150000 pound (68,038.86 kg)
150000 pound
 for perfumes, while it doubled for computers in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 year. Further
, it is depicted
 that the expense on cameras by France was 150000 which multiplied by two by the Britishers in the year 2010.

Upon more observation it can be illustrated
 that the books were highly
 demanded by UK in 2010 where the amount spent on that measured at above 400000 and French This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 books worth of 300000 Pounds. In addition
 to that, perfumes were the least Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 amongst the Britishers which experienced the value of Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.145000 pound (ca. 66 t)145000 pound (65.77 t)145000 pound (ca. 66 ton)145000 pound (65.77 ton)145000 pound (ca. 65,771 kg)145000 pound (65,770.89 kg)
145000 pound
. 