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bar chart shows a post-school qualifications and the proportion for men and women in 1999

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The provided chart highlights data about how many types of levels in post-school requirements and the propotion for men and women in Australia by 1999. Overall, what stands out from the bar chart is that almost the levels gave bigger chance for men in order to register, meanwhile for undergraduate diploma’s level provided more space for women. Looking at the details, as regard skilled vocational diploma accounted for the highest percentage of space for male, approximately 90%, which meant it is double bigger than bachelor’s degree. This was followed by postgraduate diploma, there was 70% of chance for men in post-school qualifications, it was slight bigger than master’s degree by around 10%. By contrast, if we look for the women’s, undergraduate diploma level showed to be the biggest chance for female about 72%, it meant two times higher than postgraduate diploma level. In another hand, skilled vocational diploma reached the lowest percentage for women qualifications in post-school.

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