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Channel one news viewing figures

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The line graph illustrates the information about how millions of viewers watch one news through television channel It is clearly seen that, starting month in january one news is being watched by merely above i millions of viewers on 1 pm after that this trend hover above 1 millions of viewers in daily routine until december from january. Furthermore, with regard to 6 pm, initiating at just below 5 millions of viewers in january and decreasing to about 4 millions viewers, demand of one news increase to merely above 4 millions views in april after which this trend show unstable movement until november by just above 3 millions viewers as well it increase slightly in december. Analyzing it further, as regard 9: 30 pm. The trend of one news initiated at merely above 3 millions viewers in the daily routine in the first month then it incline continuously until may about 4 million viewers along with it decrease in august by approximately, and the same trend climbed dramatically until december to 3 millions. Lastly, human watch one news channel in 11pm from the 1st may by about 0. 5 million viewees as well after increasing demand in august this trend dropp until december to 1 millions viewers. Overall, demand of one news remain same by people in the afternoon.
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IELTS academic Channel one news viewing figures

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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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