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The graph illustrates data about the percentages of three fields that domination to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000.

The graph illustrates data about the percentages of three fields that domination to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000. KV1j0
The graph illustrates data about the percentages of three fields that domination to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were a sharp decrease in agriculture and manufactoring while Business and Financial saw a considerable increase between 1900 and 2000. It is clear that, as regard the contribution in agriculture was around 50% which took the highest percent in both 1900 and 1950, before declined dramatically in the following fifty years, finishing at 1% in 2000. Look at manufactoring, the trend was similar. The contribution peaking at approximately 45% in 1990 and then there were fell significantly just under 20% in 2000. By contrast, Business and Financial saw a rapid soar during twentieth century, rising from just under 5% in 1900 to around 40% in 2000
The graph illustrates data about the percentages of three fields that domination to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000.

Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that there were a sharp decrease in agriculture and
manufactoring
while Business and Financial
saw
a considerable increase between 1900 and 2000.

It is
clear
that, as regard the contribution in agriculture was around 50% which took the highest percent in both 1900 and 1950,
before
declined
dramatically
in the following fifty years, finishing at 1% in 2000. Look at
manufactoring
, the trend was similar. The contribution peaking at approximately 45% in 1990 and then there were fell
significantly
just
under 20% in 2000.

By contrast, Business and Financial
saw
a rapid soar during twentieth century, rising from
just
under 5% in 1900 to around 40% in 2000
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates data about the percentages of three fields that domination to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000.

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