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The graph illustrates data about the percentages of three fields that domination to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000.

The graph illustrates data about the percentages of three fields that domination to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000. KV1j0

The graph illustrates data about the percentages of three fields that domination to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were a sharp decrease in agriculture and manufactoring while Business and Financial saw a considerable increase between 1900 and 2000. It is clear that, as regard the contribution in agriculture was around 50% which took the highest percent in both 1900 and 1950, before declined dramatically in the following fifty years, finishing at 1% in 2000. Look at manufactoring, the trend was similar. The contribution peaking at approximately 45% in 1990 and then there were fell significantly just under 20% in 2000. By contrast, Business and Financial saw a rapid soar during twentieth century, rising from just under 5% in 1900 to around 40% in 2000

The graph illustrates data about the percentages of three fields that domination to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000.

Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that there were a sharp decrease in agriculture and Possible spelling mistake found.manufacturing
manufactoring
 while Business and Financial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a considerable increase between 1900 and 2000.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that, as regard the contribution in agriculture was around 50% which took the highest percent in both 1900 and 1950, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 declined dramatically
 in the following fifty years, finishing at 1% in 2000. Look at Possible spelling mistake found.manufacturing
manufactoring
, the trend was similar. The contribution peaking at approximately 45% in 1990 and then there were fell significantly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 20% in 2000.

By contrast, Business and Financial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a rapid soar during twentieth century, rising from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 5% in 1900 to around 40% in 2000