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The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010.

The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010. 2bwLJ

The maps compares the developments that are accomplished in the village namely Wells-on-the-water from 1995 to 2010 situated in United Kingdom. Overall, village got modified fully with drastic improvements focusing the commercial ones except the River Wells. Commencing from the north, Farmland which was observed to have the utmost area of the village was cleared and is replaced by various shops and a post office. Moreover, a new road is built that connects the one named Woods Drive. Surprisingly, the old factory behind Woods Drive is demolished and in place of it, luxurious flats are constructed. Following the west side, Mansion gardens remained same throughout the epoch of 25 years. However, the region of Mansion home is regained by care house. On the south to Manaion lane, farm house noted in 1985 was emptied and a park is created. In contrary, the post office held the same position in 2010bas that of 1985. New houses are built moving towards the east side with the extension of Mansion home bridging over the River Wells.

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 modified fully
 with drastic improvements focusing the commercial ones except the River Wells. Commencing from the north, Farmland which was observed
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 and is replaced
 by various shops and a post office. Moreover
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 that connects the one named Woods Drive. Surprisingly
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old
 factory behind Woods Drive is demolished
 and in place of it, luxurious flats are constructed
. Following the west side, Mansion gardens remained same throughout the epoch of 25 years. However
, the region of Mansion home is regained
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house
. On the south to Possible spelling mistake found.Mansion
Manaion
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house
 noted in 1985 was emptied
 and a park is created
. In contrary, the post office held the same position in 2010bas that of 1985. New This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
are built
 moving towards the east side with the extension of Mansion home bridging over the River Wells. 

IELTS academic The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010.

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