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The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010.

The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010. 2bwLJ
The maps compares the developments that are accomplished in the village namely Wells-on-the-water from 1995 to 2010 situated in United Kingdom. Overall, village got modified fully with drastic improvements focusing the commercial ones except the River Wells. Commencing from the north, Farmland which was observed to have the utmost area of the village was cleared and is replaced by various shops and a post office. Moreover, a new road is built that connects the one named Woods Drive. Surprisingly, the old factory behind Woods Drive is demolished and in place of it, luxurious flats are constructed. Following the west side, Mansion gardens remained same throughout the epoch of 25 years. However, the region of Mansion home is regained by care house. On the south to Manaion lane, farm house noted in 1985 was emptied and a park is created. In contrary, the post office held the same position in 2010bas that of 1985. New houses are built moving towards the east side with the extension of Mansion home bridging over the River Wells.
The maps
compares
the developments that
are accomplished
in the village
namely
Wells-on-the-water from 1995 to 2010 situated
in United Kingdom
.
Overall
, village
got
modified
fully
with drastic improvements focusing the commercial ones except the River Wells. Commencing from the north, Farmland which
was observed
to have the utmost area of the village
was cleared
and
is replaced
by various shops and a post office.
Moreover
, a new road
is built
that connects the one named Woods Drive.
Surprisingly
, the
old
factory behind Woods Drive
is demolished
and in place of it, luxurious flats
are constructed
. Following the west side, Mansion gardens remained same throughout the epoch of 25 years.
However
, the region of Mansion home
is regained
by care
house
. On the south to
Manaion
lane, farm
house
noted in 1985
was emptied
and a park
is created
. In contrary, the post office held the same position in 2010bas that of 1985. New
houses
are built
moving towards the east side with the extension of Mansion home bridging over the River Wells.
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IELTS academic The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010.

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