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the changes that took place in the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

the changes that took place in the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. QKA0b
The maps illustrate the changes that took place in the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Overall, over the 80-year period Stokeford became less rural and more urban. The most significant changes were farmlands on the south and north sides destroyed and new houses built along the way, which affected the environment of the village negatively. In 1930, a farmland in the north east of the village, which was destroyed to build houses and a primary school was expanded. In between river and road houses multiplied. As for the changes in east of the village, around of large house garden, which was cleared and a large house was expanded to retirement home. In south of the village, a big farmland, which was destroyed to build to a many houses.
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became less rural and more urban. The most significant
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were farmlands on the south and north sides
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and new
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built along the way, which
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the environment of the
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In 1930, a farmland in the
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north east
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, which was
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to build
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and a primary school
was expanded
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multiplied.

As for the
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in east of the
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, around of large
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garden, which
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IELTS academic the changes that took place in the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

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