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The given process diagram delineates the production of pears as canned fruits. There are fourteen steps in the process diagram.

The given process diagram delineates the production of pears as canned fruits. There are fourteen steps in the process diagram. 9Bxn7

Overall, it can be explicitly seen that manufacturing of canned fruits which starts from hand picking in pears farm while its end with dispatch to the various shops. To commence with, the pears are collected and transported for washing to the building. Then, they go for a quality checking and pears are stored in cold temperature. After that, the pears were weighted there and in the seventh step, the skin is removed along with the core before it is cut into smaller species. In the next part of the process, the slices are ready to be put into cans and they are sealed. Thereafter, the pear of cans are cooked at a high temperature at the same time they are sterilized. After, the cans are labelled and placed in storage. In the last stage, it is packed and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be purchase for customers.

Overall
, it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can
 be explicitly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that manufacturing of canned fruits which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hand-pickinghandpicking
hand picking
 in pears farm while its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 with dispatch to the various shops.

To commence with, the pears are collected
 and transported for washing to the building. Then, they go for a quality checking and pears are stored
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 temperature. After that, the pears were weighted
 there and in the seventh step, the skin is removed
 along with the core This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into smaller species.

In the next
 part of the process, the slices are ready to be put
 into Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).cans, and
cans and
 they are sealed
. Thereafter, the pear of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are cooked
 at a high temperature at the same time they are sterilized
. After, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are labelled
 and placed in storage. In the last stage, it is packed
 and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 for customers. 