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the changes that took place in a headland as a result of rock erosion and how this led to the formation of stacks and stumps

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The diagram shows the changes that took place in a headland as a result of rock erosion and how this led to the formation of stacks and stumps. Clearly, the headland would have remained unchanged if it had not been influenced by the action of the sea. At one time, the waves hit the lower part, where was the weak area of the headland, resulting in this area being eroded and turning into a cave. Meanwhile, the sea water passing through along with the waves hitting the cliff at the top of the cave frequently made this place become an arch like Durdle Door, Dorset, some of the most popular arches in the world. Through time, at high tide, these waves reached the roof stack and beat on it with some force. This meant that rocks and boulders fell into the sea, and at some point the arch was collapsed completely and formed a stack, which was separated from the headland by the sea. The headland had kept retreating to create another stack. At the same time, the old stack was cracked and eroded more quickly by the wind then fell down and become a stump.
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that took place in a headland
as a result
of rock erosion and how this led to the formation of
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stacks
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Clearly
, the headland would have remained unchanged if it had not
been influenced
by the action of the sea.

At one time, the waves hit the lower part, where was the weak area of the headland, resulting in this area
being eroded
and turning into a cave. Meanwhile, the sea water passing through along with the waves hitting the cliff at the top of the cave
frequently
made this place become an arch like
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Door, Dorset,
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of the most popular arches in the world. Through time, at high tide, these waves reached the roof
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stack
and beat on it with
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some
force. This meant that rocks and boulders fell into the sea, and at
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some
point the arch
was collapsed
completely and formed a
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stack
, which
was separated
from the headland by the sea. The headland had
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kept
retreating to create another
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stack
. At the same time, the
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old
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stack
was cracked
and eroded more
quickly
by the wind then fell down and become a stump.
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IELTS academic the changes that took place in a headland as a result of rock erosion and how this led to the formation of stacks and stumps

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