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Some people think that climate has the most negative impact on people's lives. While believe that economy of a region has negative impact on people's lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that climate has the most negative impact on people's lives. While believe that economy of a region has negative impact on people's lives. 7WVdb
A section of society assets that the lives of people is adversely influenced by the weather of a specific region. However, other school of thought oppose this notion by saying that finance sector of an area is the most significant factor, which effects human's life. I agree with the former view. This essay will eloborate both points and justification will be provided for my perception in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, there are several reasons why a number of individuals believe that economy effects people's lives. A considerable aspect is,
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lives
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people
is
adversely
influenced by the weather of a specific region.
However
, other school of
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thought
oppose this notion by saying that finance sector of an area is the most significant factor, which effects human's life. I
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agree
with the former view. This essay will
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eloborate
both points and justification will
be provided
for my perception in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, there are several reasons why a number of individuals believe that economy effects
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people
's
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lives
. A considerable aspect is,
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IELTS academic Some people think that climate has the most negative impact on people's lives. While believe that economy of a region has negative impact on people's lives.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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