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The line chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the amount of Wildlife population, over a course of 5 years, from 2017 to 2022 Overall, a close look at the line chart highlights the fact that the figures of the Bears is witnessed a increase, the opposite was true for that of the Dolphins and the Whales. Look at the line chart in more detail, the Bears has climbed considerably from 5 in 2017 to 140 in 2021 then it is increased significantly to 185 in 2022 It can be seen that, the figure of Dolphins is decreased substantially to 140 between 2017 and 2022. There was a fluctuation in the amount of whales from 80 in 2017 to 75 in 2022
The line chart compares and contrasts data on the
changes
in the amount of Wildlife population, over a course of 5 years, from 2017 to 2022

Overall
, a close look at the line chart highlights the fact that the figures of the Bears
is witnessed
a
increase, the opposite was true for that of the Dolphins and the Whales.

Look at the line chart in more detail, the Bears has climbed
considerably
from 5 in 2017 to 140 in 2021 then it
is increased
significantly
to 185 in 2022

It can be
seen
that, the figure of Dolphins
is decreased
substantially
to 140 between 2017 and 2022. There was a fluctuation in the amount of whales from 80 in 2017 to 75 in 2022
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IELTS academic the changes in the amount of Wildlife population,

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