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the changes in the amount of Wildlife population,

the changes in the amount of Wildlife population, Mllp9

The line chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the amount of Wildlife population, over a course of 5 years, from 2017 to 2022 Overall, a close look at the line chart highlights the fact that the figures of the Bears is witnessed a increase, the opposite was true for that of the Dolphins and the Whales. Look at the line chart in more detail, the Bears has climbed considerably from 5 in 2017 to 140 in 2021 then it is increased significantly to 185 in 2022 It can be seen that, the figure of Dolphins is decreased substantially to 140 between 2017 and 2022. There was a fluctuation in the amount of whales from 80 in 2017 to 75 in 2022

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changes
 in the amount of Wildlife population, over a course of 5 years, from 2017 to 2022

Overall
, a close look at the line chart highlights the fact that the figures of the Bears is witnessed
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a
 increase, the opposite was true for that of the Dolphins and the Whales.

Look at the line chart in more detail, the Bears has climbed considerably
 from 5 in 2017 to 140 in 2021 then it is increased
significantly
 to 185 in 2022

It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, the figure of Dolphins is decreased
substantially
 to 140 between 2017 and 2022. There was a fluctuation in the amount of whales from 80 in 2017 to 75 in 2022

IELTS academic the changes in the amount of Wildlife population,

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American English

2 paragraphs

123 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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