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show the changes of the village park's map 10 years ago and now

show the changes of the village park's map 10 years ago and now Yggnj

The two maps illustrate how the Village Park has developed for 10 years. It can be seen that the park underwent a lot, especially the size of each building and of some new constructions inside it. the tennis court has been enlarged 4 times to the south of the park. The car park’s capacity was just for 20 people’s vehicles but now it can accommodate up to 50 ones. Ten years ago, in the south west, there was just an empty land and now a picnic area has been built there. The football pitch after 10 years has been wider to the south than in the past. The woods in the south east was replaced by a toilet and a cafe. The children’s play area gave way to children’s park in the north and children’s softplay area. The park now has had cycle paths along the outside of the park.

The two maps illustrate how the Village You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 has developed for 10 years. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 underwent a lot, especially
 the size of each building and of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new constructions inside it.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 tennis court has been enlarged
 4 times to the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. The car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park’s
 capacity was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 for 20 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s vehicles This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it can accommodate up to 50 ones. Ten years ago, in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-westsouthwest
south west
, there was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 an empty land and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a picnic area has been built
 there.

The football pitch after 10 years has been wider to the south than in the past. The woods in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
was replaced
 by a toilet and a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 children’s play area gave way to children’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in the north and children’s Possible spelling mistake found.soft play
softplay
 area. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 has had cycle paths along the outside of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. 