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the below map shows the paradish in past and present

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The map below shows the paradise island in past and present. Overall, the open restaurant has been constructed in the center of the island along with the cycle path in all over the island. in the past, there was a beach at top and pier with boat at the north west in the map. Scientific research station was next to the sea. At the east corner, there was natural spring. At the south east corner, there was some rocks. In the current island, scientific research station has been replace by the hotel complex and swimming pool. The boat is replaced by the cruise ship in to the sea. Swimming is also allow at the beach. Open restaurant has been constructed at the center of the map. There are also BBQ area, café. All the places are connected along with the cycle path. There is rocks at the south east part, from there scenic lookout can be possible.
The map below
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shows
the
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paradise island
in past and present.

Overall
, the open restaurant has
been constructed
in the center of the island along with the cycle path in all over the island.

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in
the past, there was a beach at top and pier with boat at the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
north west
in the map. Scientific research station was
next
to the sea. At the east corner, there was natural spring. At the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
south east
corner, there was
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some
rocks.

In the
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current
island, scientific research station has been
Consider using a past participle here: "replaced".
replace
by the hotel complex and swimming pool. The boat
is replaced
by the cruise ship in to the sea. Swimming is
also
Consider using a past participle here: "allowed".
allow
at the beach. Open restaurant has
been constructed
at the center of the map. There are
also
BBQ area, café. All the places
are connected
along with the cycle path.
Did you mean "There are rocks"?
There is rocks
at the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
south east
part, from there scenic lookout can be possible.

IELTS academic the below map shows the paradish in past and present

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