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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of visitors who came to a specific Caribbean island over seven consecutive years, starting from 2010.

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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of visitors who came to a specific Caribbean island over seven consecutive years, starting from 2010. Overall, it can be seen that the figure for visitors on a particular Caribbean island increased throughout the surveyed period. In addition, the fluctuation was noticed for the numbers of visitors staying on the island over the measured years. In 2010, there were only over and below 0. 5 million visitors who were noticed for staying on the island and staying on cruise ships, respectively. However, the figure for the island stay visitors remained the same till the year 2011, but the figure for staying on cruise ships travellers was slightly increased and touched at 0. 5 million. The total number of tourists who stayed on the island was significantly rose and observed at 1. 5 million in 2017, despite a slight fall in 2016. Similarly, there was an increased number of travellers who stayed on cruise ships record from 2011 to 2017, exactly at 0. 5 to 2 million. There were only 1 million total visitors were observed in 2010. This figure was experienced a sharp increase and reached around 2. 7 million in 2015, which remained the same till the year 2016. Surprisingly, this number rose again and touched a peak at 3. 5 million in 2017.
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visitors
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who
came to a specific Caribbean
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island
over seven consecutive years, starting from 2010.

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, it can be
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seen
that the
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for
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visitors
on a particular Caribbean
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island
increased throughout the surveyed period.
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, the fluctuation
was noticed
for the
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numbers
of
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visitors
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staying
on the
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island
over the measured years.

In 2010, there were
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only
over and below 0. 5
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million
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visitors
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who
were noticed
for
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staying
on the
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island
and
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staying
on cruise ships,
respectively
.
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, the
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figure
for the
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island
stay
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visitors
remained the same till the year 2011,
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staying
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travellers
was
slightly
increased and touched at 0. 5
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million
. The total
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of tourists
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who
stayed on the
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island
was
significantly
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rose
and observed at 1. 5
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million
in 2017, despite a slight fall in 2016.
Similarly
, there was an increased
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number
of
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travellers
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who
stayed on cruise ships record from 2011 to 2017, exactly at 0. 5 to 2 million.

There were
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1
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million
total
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visitors
were observed
in 2010. This
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was experienced
a sharp increase and reached around 2. 7
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million
in 2015, which remained the same till the year 2016.
Surprisingly
, this
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number
rose again and touched a peak at 3. 5
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million
in 2017.
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IELTS academic The given line graph illustrates the proportion of visitors who came to a specific Caribbean island over seven consecutive years, starting from 2010.

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