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The report is being written about the information and estimated regarding the exchange in proprtion of the population aged 65 and above in three different countries from 1988 to 2000. overall, the population of Canada and Germany higher than UK in both given year and predicted year. in the term, of Canadian population 6. 32 in 1988 with 4% least percentage as compare to 2000 moreover, in predicted year it will reached at 20 6. 35 however the population of UK remain study at 14 point 23% in both given year 1988 and 2000 while in 2030 it will estimated about 20. 35 % furthermore, the population of Germany faced a gradual increase from 20. 45 % 22. 0 5. 30 32% between 1988 and 2000 but in estimated year it will not about one third.

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