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The diagram below represents a survey on whether consumers would actually consider buying cars from tech companies such as Apple & Google. Summarise the information given in the diagram. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below represents a survey on whether consumers would actually consider buying cars from tech companies such as Apple & Google. lY9W

The given bar chart illustrates the amount of proportion of seven different customers are interested in purchasing cars from recognised companies are categorised based on market value and age group. Overall, the India has the highest percentage of using brand cars than all other countries while, the UK has shown the least interest in buying a car. Likewise, many young generation has significant ration and the people who are aged 50+ shows less interest in leasing a new tech car. In terms of countries, India comprises of 81% which is slightly higher than China which results only 74%. Next, Brazil is considered as third highest usage countries in purchasing a new cars which consists of only 63%. In fact, France, Germany, US and the UK are having percentage under 40% which consists figures of (38%, 32%, 29% and 26% respectively). On the other hand, there is a significant decline in proportion of usage of tech companies cars by different age groups. Firstly, people under the age of 18-34 has a highest proportion which comprises of 65% where as, 35-49 aged humans have just under a half percentage and finally 50+ group public has shown less priority in purchasing tech cars was just over a quater.

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