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The chart below shows the result of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities

The chart below shows the result of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities NQpN
The illustrated bar graph below gives the information about people who are living in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hosbart concerning their habits on coffee and tea which they drink and buy. Overall, people who are living in Melbourne got the highest percentage among other cities on spending money and went to café for coffee or tea in the last 4 weeks however people who are residing in Brisbane merely bought their fresh coffee in the last 4 weeks. Furthermore, about 45% people who are living in Sydney bought their instant coffee in the last 4 weeks in contrast to Melbourne who are consuming Fresh coffee than instant. Moreover, citizens in Adelaide has almost got the same percentage who are buying instant cofee and drinking their tea or coffee in the last 4 weeks compare to individulas who are buying fresh coffees. To sum up, People in Australia used to go on a café for tea and coffee than to bought fresh coffee.
The illustrated bar graph below gives the information about
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concerning their habits on
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which they drink and
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Overall
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the highest percentage among other cities on spending money and went to café for
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in the last 4
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the same percentage
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in the last 4
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individulas
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To sum up,
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in Australia
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the result of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities

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6.0
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