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top-ranking rewards in Winter Olympics and Summer Olympics

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The two bar chart and line graph compare data about victors of the top-ranking rewards in Winter Olympics and Summer Olympics respectively between many nations. It is clear from the information that the United States did successfully in both global championships which achieved over 250 medals in the Winter Olympics and became in the first place of all countries with about 2500 medals in the Summer Olympics. In addition, Norway was the one having the best performance in Winter international sports competitions, it did not join the highest-ranking board in Summer Olympics, though. Despite not being so remarkable as the two nations above, many countries such as Germany, USSR, Canada, Great Britain, France also had great success. According to Winter Olympics’data, those ranked after Norway and USA are Germany, USSR and Canada in order from 3rd place to 5th place. Besides, it could be noticed that four nations includes USSR, Great Britain, Germany and France had the number of medals from approximately 850 to 1000 ones.
The two bar chart and line graph compare data about victors of the top-ranking rewards in
Winter
Olympics and Summer Olympics
respectively
between
many
nations.

It is
clear
from the information that the United States did
successfully
in both global championships which achieved over 250 medals in the
Winter
Olympics and became in the
first
place of all countries with about 2500 medals in the Summer Olympics.
In addition
, Norway was the one having the best performance in
Winter
international sports competitions, it did not
join
the highest-ranking board in Summer Olympics, though.

Despite not being
so
remarkable as the two nations above,
many
countries such as Germany, USSR, Canada, Great Britain, France
also
had great success. According to
Winter
Olympics’data, those ranked after Norway and USA are Germany, USSR and Canada in order from 3rd place to 5th place.
Besides
, it could
be noticed
that four nations includes USSR, Great Britain, Germany and France had the number of medals from approximately 850 to 1000 ones.
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