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changs in office building in2010 to present

changs in office building in2010 to present 3MOpb

the rendered maps illustrate the information about alteration made in office building during 2010 and 2021. overall, the significant modifications can be seen in terms of infrastructure as offices are constructed. commencing with 2010, there was a grass area which is converted into outdoor activity area. however, in order to build offices, the kitchen and canteen area has been removed in current year. moreover, stock room is remained unchanged. in the south direction, reception and entrence are relocated between the two offices there were the offices in 2010. considering the remaining details of maps, it is observed that coffiee machine area is set on the grass area. surprisingly, meeting area is newly developed in south east side. in present time, there was a large space of grass area.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 rendered maps illustrate the information about alteration made in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 building during 2010 and 2021.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
, the significant modifications can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in terms of infrastructure as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
offices
are constructed
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCommencing
commencing
 with 2010, there was a grass You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 which is converted
 into outdoor activity You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHowever
however
, in order to build You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
offices
, the kitchen and canteen You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been removed
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 year. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMoreover
moreover
, stock room is remained
 unchanged. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 the south direction, reception and Possible spelling mistake found.entranceentrench
entrence
are relocated
 between the two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
offices
 there were the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
offices
 in 2010.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterConsidering
considering
 the remaining This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of maps, it is observed
 that Possible spelling mistake found.coffee
coffiee
 machine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
is set
 on the grass You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSurprisingly
surprisingly
, meeting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 is newly
 developed in This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
 side. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 present time, there was a large space of grass You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 