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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2015.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2015. m1lQd
The bar graph illustrates the average number of hours spent on three different pastimes by four tourist groups in Greece in 2015. They are Chinese, Americans, Turks, and Brazilians. The activities consisted of visiting the beach, reading books, and sightseeing. Overall, visiting Greek attractions was the least popular leisure activity among the tourists while reading books and spending time at the beach were the most sought-after. Of special note are the Chinese, who spent the most time reading books (eight hours), devoting the other four hours to the beach (three hours) and visiting places (one hour). By comparison, reading was the least appealing to the Brazilians and Turks, each spending four hours doing so. Brazilian and Turkish preferred at the beach. However, while the tourists from Turkey spent five hours on the beach, Brazilians overtook them by on hour in that leisure activity. Finally, similar to the Chinese, Americans, albeit to a lesser degree, spent most of their leisure time on reading (five hours), followed by visiting attractions and going to the beach (four and three hours each).
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pastimes by four tourist groups in Greece in 2015. They are Chinese, Americans, Turks, and Brazilians. The activities consisted of visiting the
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,
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books, and sightseeing.
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books and spending time at the
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were the most sought-after. Of special note are the Chinese, who
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the most time
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books (eight
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, devoting the other four
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to the
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beach
(three
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and visiting places (one
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. By comparison,
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was the least appealing to the Brazilians and Turks, each spending four
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doing
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. Brazilian and Turkish preferred at the
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on the
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, Brazilians overtook them by on
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in that leisure activity.
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most of their leisure time on
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, followed by visiting attractions and going to the
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each).

IELTS academic The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2015.

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