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The given pie charts provide an illustration of the particular contributions various economic sectors made to the overall Turkish economy in two years: 2000 and 2016.

The given pie charts provide an illustration of the particular contributions various economic sectors made to the overall Turkish economy in two years: 2000 and 2016. Nrjj0
The given pie charts provide an illustration of the particular contributions various economic sectors made to the overall Turkish economy in two years: 2000 and 2016. Overall, at the beginning of the period construction contributed the least to the economy of Turkey and agriculture was the most significant economic sector. By the end of the period healthcare and education became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution was made by financial, business and other services. Construction sector accounted for 3% of Turkey's economy in 2000, and experienced a more than threefold rose to one-tenth in 2016.
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Turkish economy in two years: 2000 and 2016.

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, at the beginning of the period construction contributed the least to the economy of Turkey and agriculture was the most significant economic sector. By the
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of the period healthcare and education became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution
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by financial, business and other services.

Construction sector accounted for 3% of Turkey's economy in 2000, and experienced a more than threefold rose to one-tenth in 2016.
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IELTS academic The given pie charts provide an illustration of the particular contributions various economic sectors made to the overall Turkish economy in two years: 2000 and 2016.

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