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The bar graph shows the difference in the production of the four methods of electrical energy for almost 4 decades in France.

The bar graph shows the difference in the production of the four methods of electrical energy for almost 4 decades in France. NMb9m
The bar graph shows the difference in the production of the four methods of electrical energy for almost 4 decades in France. As you can see the largest share of electricity generation is related to nuclear energy and the lowest share belongs to renewables in the shown period and the other methods are between them. In 1980, thermal power plants generated the most electricity that it was almost 120 (TW-H). Nuclear and hydroelectric power station produced nearby half of thermal power plants (about 60 TW-H). The renewables plant did not have almost any product that year. Between 1980 and 2005, Nuclear power generation increased dramatically and reaching to peak of 430 terawatt hours. Though the chart of thermal power plants only in 1980 was in peak of 120 terawatt hours and then decrease for 6 years and then remain stable. hydroelectric power production remained steady for three decades and It fluctuated between 50 and 80 terawatt hours, but renewable electricity production has increased since 2000 and in 2012 it reached the maximum of 30 terawatt hours.
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the difference in the production of the four methods of electrical energy for almost 4 decades in France.

As you can
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the largest share of electricity generation
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to nuclear energy and the lowest share belongs to renewables in the shown period and the other methods are between them.

In 1980, thermal
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power
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plants
generated the most electricity that it was almost 120 (TW-H). Nuclear and hydroelectric
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station produced nearby half of thermal
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plants
(about 60 TW-H). The renewables
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did not have almost any product that year.

Between 1980 and 2005, Nuclear
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generation increased
dramatically
and reaching to peak of 430 terawatt
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hours
. Though the chart of thermal
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power
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plants
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in 1980 was in peak of 120 terawatt
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hours
and then decrease for 6 years and then remain stable.
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hydroelectric
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production remained steady for three decades and It fluctuated between 50 and 80 terawatt
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hours
,
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renewable electricity production has increased since 2000 and in 2012 it reached the maximum of 30 terawatt
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hours
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IELTS academic The bar graph shows the difference in the production of the four methods of electrical energy for almost 4 decades in France.

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