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This graph shows the average carbon dioxide emission per person in Sweden, United Kingdom, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 how the levels of carbon omision changed over the years. To began with the line graph show that United Kingdom and Sweden were the highest contributors in carbon emission in 1967 with 11 and 9 metric tons respectively. Sweden reached its peak in 1977 with emission of 11 metric tons afterwards it declined constantly and in 2007 it was 9 and 5 metric tons emission for United Kingdom and Sweden respectivly. The other two countries depicted on the graph are Italy and Portugal with carbon omision of 1 and 5 metric tons which is much less than the other two countries initially but it grew at an increasing rate and readched a high in 1977 with 7 and 5 metric tons for italy and portugal respectively and afterwards became constant

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