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The table depicits the sales of 4 products which are coffee, tea, pastries and sandwiches in a café within a weekday.

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The table depicits the sales of 4 products which are coffee, tea, pastries and sandwiches in a café within a weekday. It is clear from the table that the shop attracts by far the highest volume of customer in the morning compared to other hours in a day. In addition, coffee is best-selling product in the whole day. Morning hours from 7: 30 to 10: 30 sees the largest consumption of all products, with 265 cups of coffee, while the figure for tea, pastries and sandwiches are 110, 275, 50 respectively. Besides, only 35 cups of tea and 40 sandwiches are purchased in the afternoon from 14: 30 to 17: 30, which are the lowest sales for these items throughout the day. It is noticeable that coffee is the dominant on among four products but the sale of pastries is slightly higher in the morning and in the afternoon by roughly 5 sold items. Tea is the least popular items compared to the other three product, with the consumption at its lowest is 35 cups from 14: 30 to 17: 30, while that figure for sandwiches is 40 at the same hours.
The table
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depicits
the sales of 4
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products
which are
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coffee
,
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tea
, pastries and sandwiches in a café within a weekday.

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clear
from the table that the shop attracts by far the highest volume of customer in the morning compared to other hours in a day.
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,
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coffee
is best-selling
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product
in the whole day.

Morning hours from 7: 30 to 10: 30
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sees
the largest consumption of all
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products
, with
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265 cups
of
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coffee
, while the figure for
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tea
, pastries and sandwiches are 110, 275, 50
respectively
.
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only
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35 cups
of
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tea
and 40 sandwiches are
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purchased
in the afternoon from 14: 30 to 17: 30, which are the lowest sales for these items throughout the day.

It is noticeable that
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coffee
is the dominant on among four
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products
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but
the sale of pastries is
slightly
higher in the morning and in the afternoon by roughly 5 sold items.
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Tea
is the least popular items compared to the other three
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product
, with the consumption at its lowest is
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35 cups
from 14: 30 to 17: 30, while that figure for sandwiches is 40 at the same hours.
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IELTS academic The table depicits the sales of 4 products which are coffee, tea, pastries and sandwiches in a café within a weekday.

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6.0
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