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The tables illustrate information regarding the amount of beer and fruit juice used per person a year in various nations around the world.

The tables illustrate information regarding the amount of beer and fruit juice used per person a year in various nations around the world. NMbbm
From an overall perspective, the large number of Irish people consumed bear per year. There is 155 litres per person per year. Germany second number of country, where people drink bear at 199 litres per person. Most interestingly, other 3 to 6 number of countries names are europian nations, which are consumed beer between 106 and 97 litres per person. Australia and usa also drinked lower amount of beer as compared other countries; while Finnish people least amount of beer drink at 75 litres per person. On the other side, fresh fruit juice is most popular in canda. This countries consumed 52. 6 litres per person, which ouble than United Kingdom, news land and Netherlands. On the contrary, second most popular nation is usa, where drink 42. 8 litres per person. Australia, Sweden geemany and Finland accounted from 38. 6 to 33 litres per capita. Overall, it is lucid that the amount of beer mostly cosumed in the Ireland than other nations; whereas fruit juice is higher drink by candian people than other nations.
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overall
perspective, the large number of Irish
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consumed bear per year.
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per
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person
per year. Germany second number of
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country
, where
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people
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drink
bear at 199
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litres
per
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person
. Most
interestingly
,
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other
3 to 6 number of
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countries
names are
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europian
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nations
, which
are consumed
beer between 106 and 97
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litres
per
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person
. Australia and
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usa
also
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drinked
lower amount of beer as compared
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other
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countries
; while Finnish
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people
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least
amount of beer
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drink
at 75
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litres
per person.

On the
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side, fresh fruit juice is most popular in
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canda
.
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This
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countries
consumed 52. 6
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litres
per
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person
, which
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ouble
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, news land and Netherlands.
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, second most popular
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nation
is
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usa
, where
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drink
42. 8
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per
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person
. Australia, Sweden
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geemany
and Finland accounted from 38. 6 to 33
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litres
per capita.

Overall
, it is lucid that the amount of beer
mostly
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cosumed
in the Ireland than
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other
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nations
; whereas fruit juice is higher
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drink
by
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candian
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people
than
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nations
.

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