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Coffee, Tea and Mocha drinking habits in 5 Australian countries.

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The bar chart illustrates the outcome of a questionnaire given to residents about their coffee, tea and mocha drinking routines in five Australian cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart), and the units are measured in percentages. Overall, the graph shows that a vast majority of residents in the five Australian cities, except for Adelaide, prefer Coffee over the other two beverages The second favourite drink is mocha and then followed by Tea As already mentioned, in Adelaide, the trend is slightly different with Mocha being the most desired drink, followed by Coffee and then Tea. Coffee is the preferred choice in all cities except for one with a range from about 63% to 48% of inhabitants preferring coffee. The highest data points are for Melbourne and Hobart at about 63%, subsequently, these are the highest data points of the data series. These are followed by Sydney at about 60% and finally Brisbane and Adelaide with about 53% and 48%, respectively. The second preferred hot milk drink is Mocha with a range of about 54% to 46%. The highest consumption takes place in Brisbane and Hobart at about 52% to 54%, respectively: Whist, the lowest consumption take place in Sydney and Melbourne averaging about 47% and lastly Adelaide in the middle of the range at circa 50%. The Least wanted beverage is tea, in all cities and has an overall range of about 42% to 34%. In more detail, Sydney and Melbourne have the highest data points averaging about 43% while Brisbane and Adelaide have the lowest data points averaging about 32% Lastly, Hobart falls in the middle of the range at about 34%
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, tea and
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drinking routines in five Australian
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(Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart), and the units
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that a vast majority of residents in the five Australian
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,
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Adelaide, prefer
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Coffee
over the other two beverages The second
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drink is
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mocha
and then followed by Tea As already mentioned, in Adelaide, the trend is
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with
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being the most desired drink, followed by
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and then Tea.

Coffee is the preferred choice in all
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cities
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from about 63% to 48% of inhabitants preferring
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coffee
. The highest
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are for Melbourne and Hobart at about 63%,
subsequently
, these are the highest
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of the
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series. These
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The second preferred hot milk drink is
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with a
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of about 54% to 46%. The highest consumption takes place in Brisbane and Hobart at about 52% to 54%,
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: Whist, the lowest consumption take place in Sydney and Melbourne averaging about 47% and
lastly
Adelaide in the middle of the
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at circa 50%.

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Least wanted beverage is tea, in all
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overall
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of about 42% to 34%. In more detail, Sydney and Melbourne have the highest
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averaging about 43% while Brisbane and Adelaide have the lowest
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averaging about 32%
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at about 34%
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IELTS academic Coffee, Tea and Mocha drinking habits in 5 Australian countries.

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