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The bar graph shows debt and credit in UK since 1880.

The bar graph shows debt and credit in UK since 1880. jomdX
The line graph depicts the BIS and bank of England private debt and credit data in UK since 1880 to 2020. Overall, it is clear that this graph shows fluctuation between debt and credit in given those years. Most noticeable feature in line graph that, debt have many ups and down. Its rise up to 60 to 70% in year between 1880 to 1910. Then suddenly its decline in year after 1910 about 30%. Again, its rising up to 70% in 1940. Moreover, its fluctuated up to 1980. Its significantly growing in 1990 up to 120% and its exhilarating 200%. Then its decreasing up to 160% in given year. On other hand, credit have 0% in 1880, then its stable in 0 to 10% up to 1910. Year after its goes to below 0% and again rise it. It have many fluctuation between 1910 to 1980. Dramatically its growing up to 20% in 1990. Then its goes down up to 0% in 2010. Its significantly down and after that its increase in 2020. In the given frame debt have many fluctuation and its maximum rising up to 200%, however credit have a stable fluctuation and its maximum rising up to 20%.
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data in UK since 1880 to 2020.
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ups and down. Its rise up to 60 to 70% in year
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between 1880 to 1910
. Then
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growing in 1990 up to 120% and its exhilarating 200%. Then its decreasing up to 160% in
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