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Talent is overrated and everybody can do anything like playing the piano or playing basketball if they practice it enough to make it perfect

Talent is overrated and everybody can do anything like playing the piano or playing basketball if they practice it enough to make it perfect d5bkX
Hard work beats talent when talent doesn’t work hard, we are used to listen to this quote from our parents or while watching a motivational video. People think that talent is an extortionary ability that allows us to be different and it is true, but also practicing gives us huge self-confidence and new skills. I think that hard work gives better results than a natural talent, Practicing allows football players to become starts, and we should pump our carrier as student by learning new skills. First, nowadays most football stars are used to play since they are kids, they have more than one training session in a day just to reach the level that they want or to keep it. Likewise, the Fc Barcelona team owns a big school for teaching kids how to play. They even can teach them how to love football. They start learning the basic essential rules from a very young age and by practicing and using their new methods they become stars like Iniesta or Xavi. However, you can be a talented player, but you won’t have the endurance to finish a game without practicing. Second, learning new methods to study and succeed is better than having the ability to store a huge amount of data, by studying late nights and learning methods to store information like drawing a mind map or mixing a song to memorize some historic dates to work within the future, which makes you more creative in your domain. Practice as much as you can, and you will achieve your goal with good experience. To conclude, having talent is good, but practice creates mastery. In my opinion, we should value every person who is working hard and practicing to became what he wants because self-belief and hard work will always earn you success.
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methods to study and succeed is better than having the ability to store a huge amount of data, by studying late nights and
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historic dates to
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to became what he wants
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self-belief and
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will always earn you success.
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IELTS academic Talent is overrated and everybody can do anything like playing the piano or playing basketball if they practice it enough to make it perfect

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