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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 8jPG

On the first map the city hospital is surrounded with ring road. There are 6 bus stops in front of the hospital, on hospital road. Also, there is a car park for staff and public on the east side of the bus stop. On the second map city hospital 2010, the city hospital is still surrounded with ring road but there are many other differences. First, there is still a car park on the east side but that car park changed to a staff only car park. And, a public car park was made on the east side of the hospital. Previously, there were 6 bus stops but instead of bus stops there are 2 new roundabouts, located on hospital road.

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park
. And, a public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
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was made
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