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Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. with this opinion? no5E
The maps manifest the changes were observed in theatre over the periods of two years (2010 and 2012). Overall, the two maps showed us the complete transformation of the theatre. Although lots of changes had been observed in all sections of theatre, an Auditorium and stage remained the same at their respective position. In the year 2010, a dressing room was built in the backside of a stage, while the storage was situated adjacent to a dressing room. An auditorium was exactly opposite the main entrance of the theatre. However, a Ticket Counter was available in the left corner, whereas an Admin Office was kept just next to it. Moreover, a Café area was on the right side of the main door. Followed by 2012, a Coordination room had replaced the dressing room, whilst the Dressing room was shifted to the top left corner of the theatre. Shower rooms were added just below the dressing room. Furthermore, a huge restaurant had replaced the café, also ticket house was shifted to the place of café. Storage was attached to the restaurant.
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over the periods of two years (2010 and 2012).

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, the two maps
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showed
us the complete transformation of the
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theatre
. Although lots of
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changes
had
been observed
in all sections of
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theatre
, an Auditorium and stage remained the same at their respective position.

In the year 2010, a
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dressing
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room
was built
in the backside of a stage, while the storage
was situated
adjacent to a
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dressing
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room
. An auditorium was exactly opposite the main entrance of the
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theatre
.
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, a Ticket Counter was available in the
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left
corner, whereas an Admin Office was
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Followed by 2012, a Coordination
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had replaced the
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dressing
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room
, whilst the
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Dressing
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room
was shifted
to the top
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left
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. Shower
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.
Furthermore
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also
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house
was shifted
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IELTS academic Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. with this opinion?

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