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The Bar graph represent the number of imported food in us dollar in number of nations between one decade overall it can be seen that United States was the highest rate of imported food in would and Indian was lest amount of food transfer.

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The Bar graph represent the number of imported food in us dollar in number of nations between one decade overall it can be seen that United States was the highest rate of imported food in would and Indian was lest amount of food transfer. to start with United States was the maximum amount of food imported in 2015 and china was second position of highest food imported around 100000 dollar. On the other side India was lowest quantity food imported in would In 2010 United Kingdom and China all most same number of food imported around 60000 dollar and United States was 90000 dolar food imported. moreover In the 2005 United States and United Kingdom lead the food imported in would. Indian was lowest amount of food imported around 1000 dollar and China was 20000 dollar food imported in nation
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IELTS academic The Bar graph represent the number of imported food in us dollar in number of nations between one decade overall it can be seen that United States was the highest rate of imported food in would and Indian was lest amount of food transfer.

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