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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of women high school graduates pursuing their higher education in four countries from 1980-2015.

The bar graph illustrates the proportion of women high school graduates pursuing their higher education in four countries from 1980-2015. KlXbL
Overall, it can be noted the ratio varies throughout the span of 35 years. In Australia, UK, South Korea, France and USA. In particular, Australia has the highest number of women who pursued their higher education in 1980 and 2015 at the same proportion less than 60 %. While the USA has less than 40% in 1980 and has an increase to less than 60% same as Australia in 2015. On the other hand, UK has an exponential growth in 2015 more than 50% while compared to 1980 the percentage was 40%. France had a minuscule rise to 5% in 2015. Earlier in 1980, it was at 50% ratio. South Korea has been the lowest at 15% the percentage of women who pursued a higher degree steadily grew to 30% at 2015. In comparison, of UK AND USA the number of women who are going into continuing higher education is more in number. South Korea has an overall increase when compared to other countries.
Overall
, it can
be noted
the ratio varies throughout the span of 35 years. In Australia, UK, South Korea, France and USA.

In particular
, Australia has the highest number of women who pursued their higher education in 1980 and 2015 at the same proportion less than 60 %. While the USA has less than 40% in 1980 and has an increase to less than 60% same as Australia in 2015.

On the other hand
, UK has an exponential growth in 2015 more than 50% while compared to 1980 the percentage was 40%. France had a minuscule rise to 5% in 2015. Earlier in 1980, it was at 50% ratio. South Korea has been the lowest at 15% the percentage of women who pursued a higher degree
steadily
grew to 30% at 2015.

In comparison
, of UK AND USA the number of women who are going into continuing higher education is more in number. South Korea has an
overall
increase when compared to other countries.
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